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Beyond - The - Wall - made- of - Pines by pumpkabooo Beyond - The - Wall - made- of - Pines by pumpkabooo
I went into the woods today
to see what I could find
I saw an owl and he told me that he was wise

I went into the woods today
to see what I could find
I saw a fox and he told me to run away and hide
{He said take your chances, run and hide
He said
take your chances, run and hide}

I went into the woods today
to see what I could see
I saw a deer and she told me that she was free
{She said stay a while, don't be afraid
She said
stay a while, don't be afraid }


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OKay firstly IDK what the heck the star rating things are supposed to be for so those are just my interpretations of them. Now onto the actual critique thingy.
I like what you did with the whole lighting and everything, my one issue is that some areas (ie the back leg facing the viewer) is lit up a fair bit, while the scruff isn't. It's kind of hard to tell where the actual source of light is coming from. Sometimes it looks like the top, sometimes it looks like the left...
Two other little things from my opinion are the ear could use a bit more separation from the neck (it just kind of looks like it's running along the neck? IDK how to put it properly...)
Last thing would be the muzzle seems a bit too pointy to me, it seems between a dog's and a cats. Lastlast thing is the back paw facing the observer looks a bit twisted. Okay, complaints out of the way.

Good stuff: ... everything else. XD I really like what you did with the eye, the way you did the lines and stripes is great, for the most part the shadowing is good (though I'd suggest making the whole thing maybe a tad darker), the background is neat, I especially like the little details you put in the sky. (it's a lot easier to write more about complaints than about positive stuff for art, but just because I went on in complaints doesn't mean that I think this is bad. In fact, i think its really really really good.)

All in all, you've improved a lot for sure. Keep up the great work!
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rootwhiisker Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SILV
I LOVE YOU
THIS IS JUST BEYOND AMAZING
I LOVE IT SO MUCH THANK YOUUUUU <3 I AM PAYING YOU 30 POINTS YES I AM
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pumpkabooo Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist
AAAHH YOU'RE TOO KIND YOUNG LADY
I APPRECIATE IT
I DO
OMFG THANK YOU <3 8,D
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rootwhiisker Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ANYTIME MY LOVE<3
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pumpkabooo Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist
<3
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IriisKitty Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why


WHY


WHY ARE YOUR DRAWINGS ALWAYS SO SEXY.
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pumpkabooo Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist
AHAHAHAHA not as sexy as your face though.
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IriisKitty Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohonohonohonohon


-france's laugh-


ohonohonohonohon
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pumpkabooo Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist
xD
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Reedified Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gahh. This is amazing, Silv! Those paws and eye. <3 Your anatomy is just so asdfghjkl. <33
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pumpkabooo Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist
Ohmy, thank you, darling! <333
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